JUST DREAMS!!!!!


PERHAPS I AM A DREAMER GIRL, BUT I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED TO BUY A HUMMER, I BELIEVE THAT IT IS NOT IMPOSSIBLE AND IF I WORK HARD I WILL BUY THAT PERFECT KIND OF CAR.
WELL, I HAVE NEVER BEEN IN AUSTRALIA AND I REALLY WANNA GO THERE, I HAVE ALWAYS
WANTED TO LIVE THERE. FOR ME IS ONE OF THE MOST GORGEOUS COUNTRIES IN THE WORLD AND I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED THROW OUT OF A BUNGEE JUMPING THERE. IT IS AMAZAING.
I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED TO LEARN KARATE, FOR ME IS A PERFECT DEFENSE WAY FROM PEOPLE WITH BAD INTENTIONS OR IF SOMEONE WANNA HURT ME OR ATTACK ME.
I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED HAVE A RESTAURANT, BECAUS APART OF STUDY SIMULTANEOUS TRANSLATION I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED BE A CHEF AND WORK IN MY RESTAURANT, AND I HOPE THAT IT COULD BE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND THE BIGGEST IN THE COUNTRY.
MY DREAMS ARE IN GOD HANDS. IF I TRUST HIM MY GOALS WILL BE REALITY.
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6 comentarios:

  1. Ricardo Eduardo Manjarrés Ruiz10 de agosto de 2009, 13:28

    Hello Gina, Your blog reflects Your personality, chevere. but in this phrase there is a mistake, I indicate it in small letter "AND I hope that IT BE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND THE BIGGEST IN THE COUNTRY

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  2. Juan Garcia17 de agosto de 2009, 21:06

    Hi gina!
    I really like your blog!
    is very interesting this entering, but i found a very very little mistake too (the missing words are in small letter):'I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED to HAVE A RESTAURANT, BECAUSe..'
    take care =)

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  3. Jj20 de agosto de 2009, 14:51

    Gina! excellent work, I love it
    but you made a mistake when you wrote because in this phrase: I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED HAVE A RESTAURANT, BECAUS APART OF STUDY SIMULTANEOUS TRANSLATION I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED BE A CHEF AND WORK IN MY RESTAURANT, AND I HOPE THAT IT COULD BE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND THE BIGGEST IN THE COUNTRY.

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  4. M@r!3L@27 de agosto de 2009, 14:15

    Hello Gina I think that this is a good dreams description. But I found a little mistake you wrote BECAUS and you forgot the leter e.
    Bye!!!!!

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  5. gilberto28 de agosto de 2009, 13:01

    Hi Gina.
    I think that is perfect.
    bye!!

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  6. Andrés Gutiérrez31 de agosto de 2009, 20:04

    OK GINA YOUR COMPOSITION HAVE A GREATEST Captures the sense of CARE, YOU TELL MANY THING OF YOU BUT YOU HAVE TO TAKE CARE WHEN YOU ARE TELLING PHRASES LIKE THIS: "FOR ME IS A PERFECT DEFENSE WAY FROM PEOPLE WITH BAD INTENTIONS" YOU SHOULD USE "AGANIST" IN THE PHRASE BECAUSE "FROM" IS NOT CORRECT.

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